Here are the original creative responses on the visit to dadar.
Here are the improved versions of the responses:
Teaches human to rise, The believers of the theory of mope, Hopeful wings she spreads.
At the corner of the road, Hauling all of the household load, Spreads the fragrance of the flowers, She holds the world’s inevitable powers, Striving everyday to build a peaceful adobe.
The pain of the soul grows as the sun rises every day. Each one of us walk on the paths of deeds without worrying about the difference between good or bad. Then, what pays off is karma. We pay off the heat for our own mistakes. This is where comes the concept of praying to god to help each one of us rise again. And the cycle repeats itself where one neither pays off completely nor does one get relief and peace in their existence.
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